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Old 02-21-05, 09:55 PM   #2
Tmka"D"
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aight beat is aight...
1st...flow was pretty good..delivery needs work...kinda boring delivery...lyrics were good...had a few good lines...dont sound to comfortable on the mic...mic presence needs a lil work...

chorus not really feel to much

2nd dude flow was coo...flow was aight...breathe control problem...clarity in certain parts were kinda ify...delivery was aight...lyrics were pretty good..

overall this was a coo track fellas. 1


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