first cat, very free flowish, smooth, not forced at all... The style doesn't sound 100% complete, but its a good base for elevation, lyrics were solid- hook was cool, second verse sounds like the first cat again, same good points, the cat that starts flowin after that (same guy on the hook)... sounds o.k, but not as entertaining as the first cat... your voice is much more monotone and lower volume, a little harder to grasp everything you say, but lyrically your moving in good directions, just make your sound a little more palletable to the listener, maybe more influation would help... i liked the flow more towards the end of the verse... good shit all in all, keep droppin, peep my new shit its up towards the top now. 1

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