aight beat i fucks with it...sitting here flowing to it...
1st...flow was aight...delivery was ok...i think it could have been upped a lil...lyrics were pretty good...

2nd...aight you need to work on ya flow a bit the part you got fast at is how i was rapping to the beat but i think you gotta learn how to ride it a bit better yamean...delivery need work...dont sound too comfortable on the mic...do you memorize your lyrics or read them of the paper? quality needs to be upped...but i told you i'mma help you out with that when you get on AIM...i think you got potential just gotta work on some things...

overall this was a decent track. peace

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