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Old 02-21-05, 10:24 PM   #12
Know-Gimix
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iight fuckface, listenin while typin...

I love the way dj comes onto the beat... you remind me of my boys cousin E.T- you have underground style galore waiting to oooze cuzzo... your lyrics are straight, and flow is good- however your pronounciation like mine- meaning u need to get better at it, you sound like you were off beat at one point in ur verse too, i dunno if it was a dub or you spittin but yeah... watch that shit... nice verse though...
Enygmizzle - ur shit is nice too, quality wise sounds a little better than DJ's, your flow is correct- lyrically you starting to scare me a little, you havin no trouble w/ length of your verses like old times- One thing I can recommend is don't be so rigid, you tryin so hard to keep the rhymes correct that you aint havin enough fun towards the end, u get a little robotic... watch that shit fuckface all in all though this was such a dope track as far as rv standards go... keep impressin me, and leave me feedback in some shit 11
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