Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN
S.V.
ur verse was good...u stayed on topic the whole way thru, also had great structure & vocab was on point... u didn't stretch ur lines & went into detail...overall u did a good job 9.5/10
M.F.
it was alright pretty decent topic u picked cuz it was also deep in ur verse, but ur vocab was basic, & like S.V. u should have had separated parts...ur opener was also basic as well but the closer nice use of words...structure was there but in sum parts u fell off but overall it was pretty decent ma 7.5/10
that's y S.V. wins my vote & make sure 2 return the favor
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