You have creative punches an metas, but in some places you word them wrong....

so i say you need ta work on the wordplay an structure side of things, but the punches an metas are certainly there, prolly the last person you wanted ta hear this from, but if you post in the LL Forum, then i'ma holla back, but you just need ta work on what i said, but thats just my opinnon

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