Voted For: Da_Throwdest

hood...
please do not let any of my comments discourage you from further participation in the rapverse battle forums. brutha, you need alot of elevation........and i mean that with no disrespect. you attempted to drop some multies.....nice, nice(but it doesnt win a battle)......however, you had no personals or hard hitting punchlines in your verse. also, your vocab was a little too simple playboy.......plus, your structure was horrible (you lined it up so it looked like it didnt rhyme). before you continue battling cats in the frontlines...i suggest that you practice working on your drops in the open mic forum........or in the cypher forum. people will help you out if you ask them for some assistance.......and if not.....do some research. peep alot of battles and study them. see what winning pieces look like, for real. i think that you have the potential to do something down the line....so work hard and elevate. you'll only get better homie.

throw...
you handled yours. i've seen better from you.....but you still dropped some heat. good job cutty. you had nice punches and your structure was on point. you had a nice flow going throughout your verse until the part where you accidentily left out a word in line #5, but i still got the picture. you used some alright vocab in here, but i'd like to see you step it up a little in the future (it helps).......as well as with some extra multie use. besides that (from what i noticed)..........shit was straight. you had me laughing in some areas.

once again.....good job gents. you both handles yours like some battlecats. hustle hard.......and keep up the good work. oner...


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