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Old 02-22-05, 11:25 AM   #7
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CALI would have won that battle anyway, he came real nice there.

Fiya, your punches were'nt really that hard hitting, like, in the bars, it seemed to be a lot of filler, cos your set up lines were kind of random, and the opener just didnt fit together at all.

I guess jsut work on using punches better in your text.
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