hullabaloser
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IP:
CALI would have won that battle anyway, he came real nice there.
Fiya, your punches were'nt really that hard hitting, like, in the bars, it seemed to be a lot of filler, cos your set up lines were kind of random, and the opener just didnt fit together at all.
I guess jsut work on using punches better in your text.
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