Odi et Amo
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Voted For: Showstopper
Showstopper
you an ugly mu fucka, no wins, nothing to mount
Only way you 20 times better than me, is in yo post count
^good opener
Zero's across the board, man, you're wack, thats my perception
Got a KO in yo usertitle, but it ain't in yo direction
^nice bar,feeling it
YEa, I'll 5-0 you, man, you're fuckin' wit the best
I'ma do like yo avy, and put yo fuckin' ass to rest
^last line's good,first one's self-glorification
A boy named Jig watched us battle by the law
And a 5-0 KO for you, is what jig, saw
^don't like your closer
Okay battle from you, not too many creative punches or personals but they were pretty good. Vocab wasn't too complex, bit basic but it didn't really affect the verse. Was feeling your flow and structure was good as well,just try to get more original and hardhitting personals (or punches) next time but was good read.
Jigsaw
just watch how i freestyle and merk this whore
cant handle me if this battle was with metaphors
^self-glorification
Cus if u a true showstopper u must fuckin suck
you must be slap boxing just like Mc Firetruck
^good good
u D/R spul so much no wonder y its spul sickness
cus when his finger snaps u act with a quickness
^hmmm,not really feeling it
No hate but how u gonna D/R a taliban Rapper
poppin Spuls cherry more then a whipper snapper
^nice closer
Right,so you had 2 nice hardhitting bars but the opener was pure self-glorification and the third bar wasn't that good in fact.You had more creativity though,flow was on lock and structure was nice. Found good balance with your vocab but get the self-glorification outta ya system.
My vote goes to Showstopper because I was feeling his punches a bit more...no hate...
DQ
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