May your friend rest in peace first of all...

It was pretty obvious that emotion was the strongest aspect of your piece, I liked how you brought us the memories and told us what kinda person he was. May edit your structure a little so it's easier to read but it didn't have any effect on the content. The hook was really good, very raw and pure emotion. The sadness was there but also the respect and the friendship n love that will never go away. Gotta give you props for being able to put your deepest feelings into this drop...nice going!

DQ

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