Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

sonof clearly takes this one.

phive, you had some nice shit in there........but im sorry, your verse seemed rushed and not too well thought out or planned. your structure was poor and some of your punches were so-so. if this were an actual verbal freestyle, you would get more love......but this is text homie. you got to fine tune your work. i didnt notice any personals.......and trust me, those really win battles. some of your lines didnt rhyme.......and your flow was off in some spots. try to work on building up some multies. well, keep up the good work......and please dont let my vote discourage you.

sonof, you stole this one easily. you had nice punches......a clean ass personal and good structure. your flow was also on point as well......nice. the bush bar (lines 2-4).....and the sandcastle bar (lines 7-8) were my favorites of the whole verse. if i could offer any advice......it'd be to incorporate some multies and more complex vocab. well, hold it down............and do the damn thing cutty.

please return the favor...
mizz fyre vs. SUPERVILLAIN (in frontlines)

thank you......oner....


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