Voted For: Drama Queen

This actually was a pretty good topical
Drama...u had nice imager...perfect emotion...good detail
in the subject...it could have been more thourough and
stood out more...but i still could understand wha u were sayin...some topicals do not stay on point and on subject
but yours did..Hands down u took this one

Dopeman...u had a good drop here...i dont even like u
but i must say u almost came away with this one
but i had 2 read the verses over twice so i made sure
that i was givin a fair vote...u had nice imagery
good lil story line..ya vocab could have been better
the only thing u were missing was emotion..if u had
the emotion down pact then u would of got this one...
work on your emotions...jus dont use big words in order
2 fill up a line.,..use words thats decribes on exactly
how u are feeling

*Nuff Said*

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