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Old 02-22-05, 03:08 PM   #17
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Originally Posted by ~Lady Fiya~
CALI
Im wack? so why you went and tryed to recruit me?
Now i gotta feel bad cuz i usually dont beat on my groupies
Willa on vocation we needed a new slut guess who we chose?
What you thought it was skill?when ya audios like frozen rivers
...........NO FLOW!!
Yous a killa?....i agree how many horses died for ya hairstyle?
You got the same chance winning that rappers have...
....... at getting fair trails!!
You not nice you just got more dickriders then most porn sets
Made a thread you was (leaving 2 months ago..........)
....what the fuck you aint gone yet?!
You won once..........not with a single explained vote either
Think you still mad we kicked you outta A.I...
.......and you was the co-leader!!
'Lady' spits 'Fiya'?Nope! her flame is out watch as i relight her
Cuz this bitch only has one chance of winning...
....... if she hires a ghostwriter!!

your structure is horrible kyd, FUCKin' gross...
1st line was good...
2nd to 4th was all filler, the "ice" punchline was good the first time I heard it but 30 thousand times after it SOMEHOW doesn't have the same appeal (not at al original)...
again, the weave shit iz old, but at least you didn't make any sexual references or call her a ho or something like most guys do...
wow, YOU really should be THE last person talkin' about who has cock riDers so that line dd nothing for you...
8th bar was a good personal but not really a punch...you could've flipped it better...
there's more than one win on her record, but the rest of the bar is so personal that it's a kiLLa punch to the gut...
such a lame ass closer, shit's been used more than a crack whore's pussy...


~Lady Fiya~
U dragrace hygiene cuz u iron jeans in driveways, Q’s dame?
Not being profane, u got “D” fault wins 2 like ur user name…
…your parked riders in reverse to start and end on E*
He beefs wit Jury cuz Flow ONLY made you a-ttorney!
He can’t make it nowhere, so he changed his name to CALI
Pump orgasms in your arteries, give E the heart to beat me
Flattened Saucony’s, who goes to prison for stabbing “things”?!
He plays for Crème, look how early you put out the Black Queen!
I don’t mean Chess, post all over the board can’t find recess-
Shun, my crew’s for elevation, don’t think you need-less!
Stick lyrics to monorails, cuz not once you held solo tracks
So fuckin wack, S e n s e r spit too, ONLY u got bad feedback!
U won respect as an artist?! Can’t even throw a hard hit..
With a name this bitch stole from commercials for carpet!**

didn't understand the 1st or 2nd lines...
nyce subliminal wordplay on his name, feelin' that one...
hahaa! funny shyt, good punch on that "attorney" shit, again with the nyce wordplay...
eghh, that line was filler ma, you could've flipped it way bettah...
maybe I just don't know enough about C.A.L.I. dumb ass but ion get the next 2 bars...
LMAOOOO! @ the next 2 bars, hahaaha...HOTT shit ma...
she got you on the next 2 also...creative bars, I like...
ROFL @ stole his name from a carpet commercial...you've been TREATED!, lmao...


yo I know C.A.L.I. is gonna come up in here and say some shit about how I'm riDin' her but ummm...I'd have to go wid LadyFiya on this cuz even though I ain't get a couple of her punchez, the ones that WEREN'T over my head (likely cuz iono you) were creative and her werdplay was kiLLin' your verse duke...your structure is SHIT on a platter and your punchez are played as HELL man...she didn't come as good as she could've but she covered punchez and her wordplay both being more creative than anything in your verse...F.Y.I. to whoever said something about flow, this is TEXT, flow doesn't matter 'til you pick up a mic, just don't stretch your bars...

VOTE: Lady Fiya
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