well, yeh, flow was sketch at points....but i liked the content, makes you think eh, theres alot of iffyness on the whole religion deal lately, an your verse sums it up kinda nicely, your a good writer man

"To the trained mind, one could question if religion is a paradox in itself,
Such as an unforgivable sin being forgiven, and put away on some shelf,"
-fav line right there, just flow and structure id say to work

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