listen while i type....

oh yea I hate this beat from hearing it on the radio, at least that annoying bitch aint singin on it ... flowwww, is on beat, proper lyrics but your voice is real monotone(low) and I dunno if its a reverb or you dubbing your vocals but it sounds weird in spots. You got the writing aspect of it down, just practice more with your delivery and keep upping the vocal prescence cuz right now it kinda lacks... keep droppin 1.

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