Thread: Kesse vs Sub-0
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Old 02-22-05, 10:21 PM   #7
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Voted For: Kesse

I gotta give this one to kesse

My ryhmes are cold and freeze your brain wit pain like a slurpee/
You could'nt get any credit if your name was at the end of movie/
THIS PUNCH WOULD'VE BEEN RAW HAD IT RHYMED ALL THE WAY
I crack u open wit one hand and make u like eggs and scramble u/
Its a shame i got u more chicken than noodle soup/
ONCE AGAIN IT DIDN'T QUITE RHYME THOUGH IT WASN'T A HARD PUNCH TO BEGIN WITH
You aint got the nerve to step to me like artificial legs/
You cant escape my rhymes they seek you out like the feds/(FBI)
THE SET UP WAS BETTER THEN THE PUNCH
I dont go easy or give breaks cause my name at kit kat/
Im done ryhming lets see what u do when u step up to bat/
ONCE AGAIN SET UP BETTER THEN...THERE WAS NO PUNCH

This verse proly would've won had the rhymes coordinated and had some of the punches been worded better most places the set up was in the punches place and vice versa

all you do is battle herbs and noobs, but thats like stealing from babies
even a doctor wouldnt recognize your spit, if you were suffring from rabies
THE PUNCH HERE WAS WEAK BUT THE SET UP WAS OK
playing video games all day, how does that make you an "ice kold killa"
or do you include saving royalty from turtles and gorillas?
SET UP WAS AN OKAY PERSONAL PUNCH WAS DECENT
you say you "fry niggas", hah, only if you use too much lube
ive seen stupid, but you couldnt solve a one coloured rubix cube
SET UP WAS OFF BUT THE PUNCH WAS GOOD
this battle is over, put this nerd to sleep, and time to address reality
by clicking accept, you already lost, and this verse is the fatality
THIS WAS AN OKAY LINE WITH THE PLAY OFF THE NAME OK CLOSER

I gotta go with kesse he just took this one cause the other guy didn't quite rhyme his lines fix the exact lines and you'll be fine

v/kesse
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