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Old 02-22-05, 11:10 PM   #24
Parallel
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pretty good i have to say but the flow was what kinda fell off in my point of veiw or im usto my type of flow but the stucture is great the imagery is fuckin GOOD the creativty in some of that shit was un thinkable for me not to much vocab but this is chiese food your talkin about haha, but yo the story was good just on topical well, i was feeling this

rtf on my one with prilifik links in the sig ight, pz
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