Voted For: Indeph

Homie,your skills dont increase,like if I multiply by one..
your name is like steps,the way I'm bout to rise and son..
I'ma rip you head to stomach,and just cut the rest with
my tounge,and like your avy,a win won't touch your record.
Fuck this shit,I'm giving permission for this bitch to bite.
So at least I can hear a couple good disses that isn't mine.
I'ma leave aftermath problems,I'm like a federal bomber.
homie think he got a shot,cause he named after medal of honor.
Now my mission is to make rising sun see in a different light.
so I'ma take away ya joy,but you can still do the dishes right.
you know deph,but you got No crew,no talent and no rep..
What the fuck is up with all them No's,are you kanye west?

Indeph you had some hard hitting punches and some amusing personals. I liked the way you flowed and your structure was beautiful. I laughed pretty much throguth your whole verse. my favorite line was.

I'ma leave aftermath problems,I'm like a federal bomber.
homie think he got a shot,cause he named after medal of honor.


I don’t need to grapple to have assholes baffled
Cause like 33 on the Magic
You about to face an up “Hill” battle
I’ll rattle your hood as I send hilarious bomb threats
To every nefarious project in the USA
Please do be-have, or I’ll coerce you bite the curb
Like I’m a “neo-Nazi” Edward Norton
To support abortion, “14 years ago” I would been a Conservative
Your mom said “I can’t believe I gave birth-to-this”
With a multitude of purposes, I’m a rising-sun like Amaré last-night
You couldn’t be “bright” even if I shined a flash-light
The only time you get “in deph” is when you look up Spark Notes
Like Afghani women, you’re a human cargo
And you’ll always remember-me as your ultimate rap enemy
Like the death of JF Kennedy
Your death will remain mysterious
Cause you winning will never happen
Like a Lebanese dating a Syrian
I’m surrounded by millions like Prince Williams
In extreme shame you about to lose, that’s your fate be
Cause basically your rhymes like the NBA East
“Coming lackadaisically”

Rising son improve with everything. Ya flow was off and your structure was wack. Look at my battles and you'll see some good structure. You lack any personals and you lack any hard hitting punches. Your whole verse didn;t make sense and wasn't hitting right.

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