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Old 02-23-05, 02:33 AM   #21
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From: detriot,mi
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Voted For: X-CELL

excel won the battle he had punchlines that hit nice flow was not choppy and structre was good no lines were streched
the words you used could have been a little more complex but it was okay my favorite line was when you said i drop "POUNDS" like jared did,gettin rid of this kid is imperative
i make u run like mascara did,take 2 steps like ciara did/ that line was fire i read it to the till i coaplse beat it was really good yo man are u signed if not you really should be i wanna do an open mike with you hit me up nigga your all aroung verse gets a 9/10 from me

pounds alot of your bas didnt rhyme you had a couple of ight lines but u didnt come reall prepared your verse gets a 6/10 from me keep workin nigga