Voted For: hood_dawg

im sorry gentlemen.......but this battle was a letdown (no disrespect fellas). in my opinion, neither of you came too creative or funny in this. nothing at all was really memorable to me.

hood...
you improved since the last battle i peeped of yours....good job. your structure is way better than the last time i seen it .......and you even tried to incorporate some personals in this battle (thumbs up). try to step your vocab up and fix your flow.......it was off in points. also, some of your verse seemed like filler.......be careful with that in the future. i gave you this win because you simply dropped more disses. work on those though homie.........a few of them were pretty played.

young...
work on your punches, your rhyming, your personals and your vocabulary. if you want to spice your verse up some......try to drop some multies. when you have an unlimited amount of lines to work with.....be careful. (example) if you only drop 6 hot lines.....and your opponant drops 200 mediocre lines......your opponant will most likely win due to their overwhelming attempt. i dont want to sound like im hating on you playboy......but you need to do alot of elevating brutha. check out the cypher and open mic forums. take a look at some of the work there and peep how shit is generally done. it might help you some. continue to work hard and build up ya skills cutty. goodluck out there.

please return the favor battlecats...

mizz fyre vs. supervillain (in frontlines)

hold it down, oner...


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