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Voted For: Philly
wow, pretty weak battle in my perspective
im goin to have to go with philly on this though...just because he came harder and his attempt at punches/personals were better...they were weak, but his attempt was better...gotta elevate man, think of more creative stuff, work with wordplay, both of yall need to get a flow happenin, and structure needs to improve, philly, finisher was probs your best line, had the right idea....next time, add some complexity, some personals, wird
same with you mcbadboy, you gotta elevate alot, punches were bitter....flow, was horrid, sorry man, that verse looks like you thought out in 2 min, then typed it in 30 seconds, so, just work on shit
v/philly
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