Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

close battle...both were tight

miss fyre....i was feeling yours, up till the end, thats were you kinda lost me, didnt like how you played out the end, with that other dude killin her, but you had good emotion, the vocab at the start was awesome, really got me into it, but then i stated to fade at the end...i think you lost alotta flow and wordplay dropped a little, you didnt keep that consistancy and i think if you did, you may have taken it....but because your ending got a little choppy and you lowered the vocab and wordplay, you lost hold of the battle, cause i just wasnt feeling it anymore at the end....but keep this shit up, your a good writer

Supervillain...i guess thats why you get my vote....you two seem about on the same level....but you kept a consistency of emotion and passion, mixed with vocab and wordplay throughtout your whole verse...and thats what really gets me, somethin that will keep me on the edge the whole time, i feel you did that better here, good flow, good use of multis at the start, structure was okay, creativity was great, had complexity, good verse man

v/ supervillain

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