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Old 02-23-05, 03:27 PM   #12
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From: Adanac
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Voted For: Linguistics

easy battle

gotta go with linguistics...his verse was just superior to yours man....his punches had more creativity/complexity, they hit harder, better wordplay and vocab....nice flow, kept the structure consistent, nice plays off the name...personals were okay, could be better, but overall, he took this one

saw my post count, thought he'd win, just a newbie chaser
must be from oklahoma, how hes loosin sooner than later
-fav line, i laughed,

es an ef.....you gotta elevate alot....not really any flow to it, and structure was lacking....were you did attempt punches/personals, they were ruined alot by your wordplay and vocab choices....the opener coulda been worded better....dont worry though man, just work at it, elevate, no hate

v/linguistics
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