Voted For: X-CELL
lol you get this one cuz yours actually rhymed... pounds yours didnt rhyme man your structure was ight though .. but the nitty gritty//why is this shit a pinkslip? you both need to elevate no hate
metas//were there any? ok there were x-cell
punches//for jus plain rhym'n his shit x-cell
appeal//none
wordplay//pounds
structure//pounds
rhym'n//x-cell
vote//x-cell only cuz his shit rhymed ha both you got possiblities but no pink' slipp'n til u actually can serve it up hot ha
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