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Old 02-23-05, 08:38 PM   #10
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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

this pretty easy battle to decide, heres what i see....

Yprospect
>ya rhymes dont cut it...tryn to stab wit a dull knife
i live rugged, but fuck it its my life,im just thuggin
-first okay, 2nd line, pointless 3/10
>ya buggin...think ya words can hurt me
i know ya name aint james, cuz ya sho' not WORTHY
-i dunno, really weak....5/10
>feel my reign as i disperse these, verses they flame
im a curse to the game just rememba the name
-again, first line good, but second just went nowhere...4/10
>PROSPECT,i know ya ass weak and you aint even dropped yet,
ya name slob k, why is that, cuz you slob the knob
-doesnt even rhyme, weak attempt at personal too...3/10
>than get pounded from the back,ima phenomenon
n dog ya wack im droppin bombs much like sadaam in fact
-not really rhymin well here....5/10
>ya flow like fuckin wit two condoms on, no feelin that
and if you dont feel me,well feel my gat cuz i bust freely
no matter where im at
-haha, first line was dope, second weak again...6/10

-man, you gotta elevate hardcore bud, sorry to come off all harsh, but your structure was bad, flow needs some work....had good ideas about punches and shit but you gotta up the vocab and wordplay to really make'em hit, nah mean....wird, keep elevatin yo

slobk....solid verse man, not gunna post it up though, in a hurry....i thought your strucure and flow were your weakest points, had good punches/personals and creativity, those were what stood out and really won this...but structure, was lacking, especially near the end...flow little off too....so, just keep that in mind next time, but solid verse man, intro was probs your best line...haha i laughed, same with the school/nerd one....keep elevatin man...wird

v/spitk
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