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Old 02-23-05, 09:19 PM   #14
xRell-i-Ventx
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From: BodyMore,MurdalaNd
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this beat is nasty as shit...aight first person not really feelin the voice nahmean flow could have been smoother sharper....umm delivery needs work emotion as well....lines are str8......


aight damn i could flow where the hooks suppose 2 be.....



aight breath control need work...lyrics are really good flow is better then the first cats..u need work wit your delivery emotion word clarity....umm all in all both of u need work on the listed above..props on work keep elevating
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