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Old 02-24-05, 05:21 AM   #17
Dex
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Mizz fyre: your verse was real hot. A lot of good vocab put to use, topic was used really well and the flow was hella good with a nice structure. not really any wordplay or metaphors tho. But all-in-all a tasty verse.

Supervillain: Once again, unmatched, Sheer quality through quantity aswel.
I want to paste a bar that i liked for some reason:
"two weeks after the verdict, sis slit her wrists...and died at age fourteen
i had to learn how to walk again...and mom did her mourning by using morphine"
-This is just to illustrate how good this verse was. Some lovely vocab, multis, topic was used brilliantly and i liked all three parts to it. I think personally the second part was my favourite. Keep it up SV.

I dont vote on topicals normally so if you need me to post more feedback, PM me and il post it straight away.

RTF please peeps
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