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Old 02-24-05, 05:50 AM   #31
50Cal.
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pound your fucking syllabal count is horrid shit is way off flow is horrible shit barely rhymes at all strutucre is ok punches and disses really were weak you need to drop much harder then that in battles to win your shit had no creativity and shit was played in other places no hate you just dropped a overall weak ass verse 3/10
x cellyou got good flow here and a nice syllabel count on it but your strture looks bad still it was easy to read punches and disses were weak but slightly better then your oppenants were and that gave you the win in my book 5/10
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