aight beat i'm feeling...
1st dude...flow was ok...need to work on breathe control...delivery was aight...clarity is off in some parts...lyrics were coo....
2nd dude- first dude i like ya rap voice...flow was was pretty good...delivery was aight...lyrics were coo...
chorus ehhh...
overall this was an aight joint
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