aight beat i'm feeling...

1st dude...flow was ok...need to work on breathe control...delivery was aight...clarity is off in some parts...lyrics were coo....

2nd dude- first dude i like ya rap voice...flow was was pretty good...delivery was aight...lyrics were coo...

chorus ehhh...

overall this was an aight joint


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