this was a good piece right here...

mizz rhyme scheme was good on your verse...content was deep and felt...

presidential issues mean nothing to the situation they're facing
thinking of home, is the only thing that can keep their mind racing

^^^that line stuck out to me


jay...you had a good verse too nice metas..content was felt as well....flow was coo...


i really enjoyed this piece right here...makes me wanna find one of my old text joints and post it...lol...maybe i will...anyway keep it up


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