first cat... sounds like he's on lithium, he's just speaking to the beat, very little energy- flow is o.k but the rhyme scheme goes from half decent to rhyming move with who, Hook is better but the presence is still lackin, 2nd verse... just like the first dood, sounds like a corpse rhyming, put some feeling into it, make me wanna listen to the song- 3rd guy is the best on the track, he had the most palatable sound... But you all need to perform somewhere and find a presence.. keep droppin kid, good to see u makin moves...1

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