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Old 02-24-05, 02:50 PM   #7
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Jay-had good structure very good punches sometime your flow waz off but you put effort into dis on
Black-it waz good at first den it feel off and you shud fix your structure try to make every line the same length it makes it easier to read
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