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This was feedback posted for Kesse
IP:
heres my feeds:
STYLE:
sorry BLACK, didnt feel anything from ur rhymes, Kesse had something, tho u both were almost writing plain out sentences, rather than dropping verses
PUNCH:
a dancing boy with toys who limps, couldve came out worse than it is, if i was kesse i surely wont be "shook up"; good work by Kesse tho, lines werent as predictable as black's, which is a good thing
FLOW:
black, did u actually recite what u wrote? besides the lack of flow from setup lines to punchlines, i simply couldnt connect the pieces together; kesse had the better overall flow, but also lacks rhythm in single lines
TECHNIQUE:
decent wording from both... personally i liked the references used by kesse and the way u ended ur drop
S: Kesse > BLACK
P: Kesse > BLACK
F: Kesse > BLACK
T: Kesse > BLACK
OVERALL: BLACK, u couldve definitely done some more damage than u did with the ideas u had, but Kesse had u played out
VOTE: i stiLL cant... but wouldve been for Kesse
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RiDiKiLLoZ
RIP Dylan Flemings 85-03
love u bro
my battles:
CeleriTy vs RiDiKiLLoZ
ur battles:
iLL get to em, 1 by 1...
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