i like the way the beat kicks in with the vocal sample in it...

First Flow- Dont be insulted, you sound like a young female(if you are, then cool), your vocals are kinda ear peircing, hollow like tony said- You have the idea, but it needs more to it, flow could use some improvement- sounds like you workin w/ the right person tho so good luck...1

Second Flow- Yeah man you just took this shit over instantly, Completely owned the track, very comfortable, confident flow- voice was solid, ended kind of abruptly, but this was your song- Keep droppin em' and good luck to both of u... and peep "Sick of This"

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