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This was feedback posted for SQUAD-UP
IP:
just feedin tiLL i can vote:
STYLE:
u both got creative thoughts, different from the fresh shit ive been reading, SQUAD-UP executed his lines a bit harder than dice, slight edge here
PUNCH:
i think squad delivered some better ones, although dice's "taking the piLL" line was up there if i read the pun correctly
FLOW:
squad started off broken but came thru well in the end, dice has awesome rhythm between setup lines and punchlines, but when u put the whole thing together, somethings amiss
TECHNIQUE:
u both avoided plain old crap, which i like... ok enough input im not even voting here
S: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice•••• (slightly)
P: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice••••
F: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice••••
T: =tiE=
OVERALL: i think if u took a little more time, u could both easily cut out some unnecessary wording, but besides that pretty tight battle here
VOTE: stiLL cant, but wouldve been for SQUAD-UP
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RiDiKiLLoZ
RIP Dylan Flemings 85-03
love u bro
my battles:
CeleriTy vs RiDiKiLLoZ
ur battles:
iLL get to em, 1 by 1...
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