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Old 02-24-05, 07:45 PM   #11
RiDiKiLLoZ
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This was feedback posted for SQUAD-UP

IP:

just feedin tiLL i can vote:

STYLE:
u both got creative thoughts, different from the fresh shit ive been reading, SQUAD-UP executed his lines a bit harder than dice, slight edge here

PUNCH:
i think squad delivered some better ones, although dice's "taking the piLL" line was up there if i read the pun correctly

FLOW:
squad started off broken but came thru well in the end, dice has awesome rhythm between setup lines and punchlines, but when u put the whole thing together, somethings amiss

TECHNIQUE:
u both avoided plain old crap, which i like... ok enough input im not even voting here

S: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice•••• (slightly)
P: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice••••
F: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice••••
T: =tiE=
OVERALL: i think if u took a little more time, u could both easily cut out some unnecessary wording, but besides that pretty tight battle here
VOTE: stiLL cant, but wouldve been for SQUAD-UP
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