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This was feedback posted for Blac-Out
IP:
STYLE:
props to blac-out... 1 of the better drops ive seen on this site since ive been here. "snow in the flurry"? i didnt know that was hard at all.
PUNCH:
most lines were hittin on pointe for Blac-Out, u gota watch out tho man, MC IgGY is stiLL snowing on u...
FLOW:
awesome job by Blac-Out
awesome job by MC IgGY makin it obvious that there was an awesome job by Blac-Out
TECHNIQUE:
Blac got up and personal at times, the Pac line is tight,
"against me you require a higher level of writing"?
"rusty and dusty"? MC ur rhymes were predictable, and that only means taht people have seen the words too many times together, freshen em up a bit. n by the way, stove n dove end in the same 3 letters, but they sound distinctly different, "oh" and "uff" respectively. ur last 2 lines seemed like a late attempt to rhyme for the last time, didnt quite do it for me.
S: Blac-Out > MC IgGY
P: Blac-Out > MC IgGY
F: Blac-Out > MC IgGY
T: Blac-Out > MC IgGY
OVERALL: Blac-Out > MC IgGY, MC u got some good shit, but need more time spent working on puttin it all together
VOTE: cant yet again, but obvious whos got my vote
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RiDiKiLLoZ
RIP Dylan Flemings 85-03
love u bro
my battles:
CeleriTy vs RiDiKiLLoZ
ur battles:
iLL get to em, 1 by 1...
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