aight the beat i aight...

chorus was kinda catchy

1st dude- flow was on point...lyrics were aight...delivery was pretty good

2nd- aight flow was on point...got a fast slow thing going....lyrics were good...i dont like how you ended it with the pause and then the last line...delivery was good

3rd- flow was good...delivery was pretty good...lyrics were aight...sound like you got a few breathe control problems in a couple of spots but not bad...


overall this was a good joint...peace


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