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This was feedback posted for Hot Sauce
IP:
im not sure which part of hot sauce's shit i was sposed to read... but dont matter heres just my feeds aint votin nEway.
STYLE:
hotsauce's got the edge with the constant attempt on internal rhymes, but u gota be careful, theres a fineline between being artistic and pure crampedthefucktogether; AK, for a first, this shit alone shows taht u've got deep potentials, keep workin on this shit man
PUNCH:
"instead of a challenge i take is as a deathwish, read ur past battles, my worst rips ur best shit!" OUCH!!! sick line... only... it's AK's first battle here, get ur facts straight
"i fucked ur mom while she was pregnant with u, so AK was born with my dick in his mouth" iLL give u this one, but this was close to being as stretched as AK's blow wit the bong.
my personal favorite? "someone needs to spice u up cuz this hot sauce is mild"... DAYMN!
FLOW:
hotsauce, with some better breaks, u could kiLL the crowd
AK, u lost ur momentum as u built ur verse
TECHNIQUE:
i see some real potential damage here guys, keep it up
S: Hot Sauce > A. K. Nightfall
P: =tiE=
F: Hot Sauce > A. K. Nightfall
T: Hot Sauce > A. K. Nightfall (keep workin at it AK, ur there)
OVERALL: hotsauce's got it, but not by the big landslide i expected
VOTE: Hot Sauce, but im stiLL a post away from being able to make this official
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RiDiKiLLoZ
RIP Dylan Flemings 85-03
love u bro
my battles:
CeleriTy vs RiDiKiLLoZ
ur battles:
iLL get to em, 1 by 1...
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