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Old 02-24-05, 09:46 PM   #42
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From: Durty Souf
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Voted For: J~FOUR

flow- j~four, was structured betta, which made it flow
alot betta then alias king
punches- alias king, some of ur punches were played, &
j i felt ur punches were up 2 par & hit harder
personals- j~four, had alt more, & were alot betta...
where alias king were pretty lame & didn't
form 2getha well..suggestion u need 2
elevate in ur rhymes & wordplay
multis- obviously, j~four had the best out of the 2 wit
his rhyme scheme he's guaranteed his flow &
multis will win..alias king ur a newb so u should
take a close look & u'll c
vocab- j~four clearly took this category by ease; where
alias u were lackin' & need serious elevation
originality- j~four had the most original lines while alias
ur lines were played out, but overall j had
the best verse
v/ j~four

make sure 2 return the favor