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Old 02-24-05, 10:05 PM   #31
RiDiKiLLoZ
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Voted For: Chuck Low

STYLE:
mediocre attempt by both; javelin u couldve edged this if u actually had decent rhymes less the 1st 2 lines

PUNCH:
i felt nothing here guys.
"Tha Only Reason U Eva Held A Glock Is Cuz U A Cop" ok... and?
"Next Thing U Know U Busted By Javelin" dont throw punches at urself
Javelin, get to the point, n u couldve edged this as well

FLOW:
didnt feel urs Jav, Chuck's was ok, last line was a drag tho

TECHNIQUE:
good try Jav, but ur overall ideas didnt sink in; defensive take by Chuck, should work on broadening ur thoughts and go on the offensive.

S: =tiE=
P: =tiE=
F: Chuck Low > Javelin
T: Chuck Low > Javelin
OVERALL: good concept Chuck, but again, not hard enough hits; Javelin this is a battle, not a page in ur diary
VOTE: Chuck Low

by the way... canada aint ALWAYS cold, n glocks are not commonly used by cops.
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