damn all the uppss.... lol o.k...

Hook, sounds nice- quality isn't perfect, but its better than before - your presence needs some help, but that comes with time, no way to really speed it up unless your out performing- I liked the first verse more than the second, just cuz 20 grands voice makes it tough for me... If you (20) could make your lyrics clearer I'd feel it more, but you just have this really low toned voice that melts into itself and it kinda bothers me personally- no hatred cuz your flow is cool- just needs polishing... stay up fellas, keep droppin and stay active.1

EDIT: - its not your voice(20)... Its your energy-- JUMP AROUND... lol - foreal just upp ur energy a bit more on the track... (both)

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