Voted For: Keln WiTz

STYLE:
similar styles here. weak finishes.

PUNCH:
Keln, good punches, "back to the future... wearing a cast" was decent, so was the kiddie meal deal.
$ike, good try on the personal with Keln's name, "with a pale look like a ghost" - by this u mean you or him?... yeh tahts right, PUNCH HIM

FLOW:
i felt something here... could use a little diversity

TECHNIQUE:
good reference to Grudge, good metaphor on Food Chains, up ur vocabs, and work on a better closer

S: $ike > Keln WiTz
P: Keln WiTz > $ike
F: Keln WiTz > $ike
T: Keln WiTz > $ike (slightly)
OVERALL: decent punches, decent flow, work on makin this shit more intense and uve both got a set of wheels (to go places ha)
VOTE: Keln WiTz

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