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Old 02-25-05, 12:13 AM   #10
L. Veracity
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hook could be a lot better...words itself are kewl but don't like how you delivered 'em...

1st dude, lyrics cuold be better especially at the beginning, flow needs work...

20Grand, ya part right here should've been left out cuz there's no point in sipttin' just a few bars instead of 1st dude just making his longer...ya other verse iz aiight, but definetly not the best I've heard from you...you can do a lot better than this...

not feelin' this cuz I know both ya'll can do bettah than this...stay up though kydz...
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