Voted For: Diplosive

STYLE:
cant feel either; poor closers in both cases, need to step it up here

PUNCH:
(X)eed, ur punches made sense, but were way subpar and elementary, Elvis Presley, Gwen Stefani... sour cream? DISNEY? i rest my case
Diplosive, some good ones, some were just wack

FLOW:
cant find the flow here guys, somewhat awkward rhythm

TECHNIQUE:
(X)eed, "like, like, like, like, like, like, like"... u need to expand ur vocab
Diplosive, this a battle, not a poorly grammared essay, lets hope this was actually "something keyed up real quickly"

S: (X)eed > Diplosive
P: =tiE=
F: (X)eed > Diplosive
T: Diplosive > (X)eed
OVERALL: i found myself not weighing out which 1 of the 2 being the better, but rather which 1 of the 2 wasnt as bad... need some work guys, this was a hard vote
VOTE: Diplosive

ps:
(X)eed, expections (in ur sig) is not a word, by the way is it (X)eed or (X)CeEd, people know u by ur name, they cant if u dont even have 1
Diplosive, anorexic is the word ur looking for, dont make up words just to rhyme! while we're on this topic, its losses not losts, plagues not plaques, sense not cents

using the right words is a major part of being lyrical.

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