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This was feedback posted for Speats
IP:
STYLE:
whats funny bout being canadian... we got health care bitch!
aite with that said... hammer ur shit was pretty basic, speats dont drag ur lines, get to the point n hit hard
PUNCH:
after "canadian" and "pc cheats" one could only hope that a real punch would land some time soon.
Speats got awesome opener, got sloppy as u progressed
FLOW:
Hammer, create a flow from ur sentences
Speats, again dont drag on, cut unnecessary wording and get right to the damage
TECHNIQUE:
Hammer u need to work on vocab, nothing too impressive seen on this work; Speats... "readed"? damn. remind urself of this next time: u cant sbell lick this anne stiLL exbect toe sound lyrical.
S: Speats > Hammer
P: Speats > Hammer
F: =tiE=
T: Speats > Hammer
OVERALL: enuff said, Speats takes it
VOTE: Speats, but Hammer's lucky he raised post counts to 50... ha
work on your shit boys
peace
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RiDiKiLLoZ
RIP Dylan Flemings 85-03
love u bro
my battles:
CeleriTy vs RiDiKiLLoZ
ur battles:
iLL get to em, 1 by 1...
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