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Old 02-25-05, 03:56 AM   #7
RiDiKiLLoZ
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This was feedback posted for Speats

IP:

STYLE:
whats funny bout being canadian... we got health care bitch!
aite with that said... hammer ur shit was pretty basic, speats dont drag ur lines, get to the point n hit hard

PUNCH:
after "canadian" and "pc cheats" one could only hope that a real punch would land some time soon.
Speats got awesome opener, got sloppy as u progressed

FLOW:
Hammer, create a flow from ur sentences
Speats, again dont drag on, cut unnecessary wording and get right to the damage

TECHNIQUE:
Hammer u need to work on vocab, nothing too impressive seen on this work; Speats... "readed"? damn. remind urself of this next time: u cant sbell lick this anne stiLL exbect toe sound lyrical.

S: Speats > Hammer
P: Speats > Hammer
F: =tiE=
T: Speats > Hammer
OVERALL: enuff said, Speats takes it
VOTE: Speats, but Hammer's lucky he raised post counts to 50... ha

work on your shit boys

peace
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