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Old 02-25-05, 12:48 PM   #11
Technical
23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

O SHIT...Good battle

punches- marvjay barely edged out with tis sick line yo:
ima put ya "brain in ya mouth" bet dat a really "blow ya mind"....
nigga u suck ya current punches r probly in my oldest ryhme...
and buck shot...that bicycle line...is played as fuck homie..

personals- tie...they both had some decent personals flowin for them..

wordplay- i liked marv jay's wordplay better..he executed his shit better.

structure and flow- Buck had this yo..marv jay ur structure was off in this battle..but Buck's was easie to read.

vocab- none really stood out in this battle in my mind..

closer- lol...

ya moms is a horny hoe..but last nite she wanna call me tho..
like jay ur da "17836786th" man im bringin 2 da "maury show"
VS
Kids got an AssHole as ''Open''as a Quarrey
So i'ma end this battle By FUCK YOU, An i'm so sorry........

^^man i liked marv's closer betta...it was funny..but dope urs was aite...but not better than marv's..

vote- marvjay1009