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Voted For: Escobar
STYLE:
EyeDEAs done an alright job, nothing out of the ordinary tho; Result, u got a lot of arbitrary words in ur piece, and when they're not forced, they dont really pack much
PUNCH:
Result, ur close to writing a book explaining each of ur punches, figure out what ur hittin ur opponent with, and cocentrate on that; EyeDEA ur punches were almost there, but stiLL rather weak
FLOW:
Results got good beginning, seems like ur verse got cut off n never got a closer tho; EyeDEA's toying wit a 7 liner but i dont think u quite made it, i also suggest extending the word "tantra" to spit as a 3 syllable word like "camera"
TECHNIQUE:
Result u needed to end off with an explosive punch, that wouldve given u the edge, but wit ur current closer its like a slap on the face... ur own face; EyeDEA ok job, lines were somewhat played out
S: =tiE=
P: Result > EyeDEA
F: EyeDEA > Result
T: EyeDEA > Result
OVERALL: u both need to work on better wording to deliver clean but hard punches, urs edged him this time Result, but just barely
VOTE: Result
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