haha, funny, cause some of that shit could apply to me....i like how you depicted each one, so many people i know and from rv were just poppin into my head fillin those roles, haha ,good job.....just work on structure and flow, get that capped off, and try to be consistent with the tone of writing, like, you dont wanna be really funny, then get all serious, nah mean, but solid peace

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